10月12日托福·考题分析.以下思路和范文仅供同学们学习·参考。
综合写作回忆
重新引入狼
1.恢复生态平衡,
2.不会造成经济损失,
3.对人危害没那么大
@165期 青; 168期J;162期A欢迎同学们在下方留言区补充~
学术写作分析
Doctor Achebe:
一个人应该尽可能多地交朋友(large group,but not deeper)
or
专注于和一小群人维持深度关系
同学一:
小group好,因为可以和信任的人讨论challenging是问题,这个是valuable的
同学二:
略
审题注意点
(1)这道题应该重复了23.11.15日的考试原题。
Let's explore the dynamics of social interactions and their impact on our well-being. Socializing in smaller groups versus larger circles can have varying effects on one's health and happiness. Some argue that smaller groups foster deeper connections, allowing for more meaningful interactions and a sense of closeness. Conversely, larger friend circles offer diversity and exposure to different perspectives. Which do you think contributes more to a person's health and happiness: spending time with a close-knit few or a larger group of friends?今天的题目跟这道题很相似,应该略有改动。这也命中了老师在10月5日推出的 考前冲刺团 中的原题。
团员考后反馈
同学2
(2).这是到朋友类话题。属于托福小话题,在改革后考得比较少。但是每年还是会有几率重复。大家不要掉以轻心。
(2)选择哪一种朋友?主要还是对比这2种朋友的好处。如果题目问的是:prefer? than.. 建议在文段中进行对比。
(3). “more friends”:好处1: 开阔视野. 因为交往的朋友多,所以兴趣爱好,教育背景等会非常不一样。能给我提供很多不同的信息,开阔视野。好处2:有助于我的事业发展。比如有同行的前辈,能给我提供更好的工作机会等。
(4). "asmall group of close friends"
好处1:能够真心理解和帮助我。当我需要帮忙的时候,不管是在工作还是学业上,他们会真心地提供帮助,也不会求回报。
好处2:会很放松。不用担心他们会judge 我。跟他们在一起展现真实的自我。
参考范文:
I prefer having a small group of close friends, mainly because they provide unconditional trust and support, qualities seldom found in casual acquaintances.Life inevitably presents various challenges,from academic struggles to work-life balance issues. In such times, close friends often become our primary support system.
Unlike newer friends who might hesitate to offer help, close friends typically prioritize our needs.For instance,they willingly assist with complex problems, care for our children when we're delayed at work, and share valuable advice based on their experiences.
[对比]Whilea broader social circle can broaden our perspectives, offering insights from diverse backgrounds,this advantage often pales compared to the profound support and understanding offered by close friends.These intimate connections, forged through shared experiences and interests, provide a unique depth of companionship that is crucial during life's challenges.
Therefore,despite the benefits of a wider network, the irreplaceable support of a few close friendsholds greater value for me, making a small, tight-knit group of friends my preferred choice.(167字)