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Dr. Achebe
This week we are studying how policy for public schools is created and how it may change overtime.One very important topic for educational policy involves what courses should be taught in schools. Many people believe that new forms of communication and new kinds of employment require that new and different kinds of courses be taught. The question l want you to discuss is whether new, innovative subjects should be taught in public schools.
Paul:
I firmly believe that public schools should introduce new courses. For example, people are increasingly communicating through sharing photos and videos on the internet. I think a course on video composition - how to create compelling and effective videos - would be highly valuable for today's students. There are many other similar topics that students could benefit from as well.
Kelly:
However, I don't believe that high school curriculums need to change drastically. The primary aim of most high school courses is to prepare students for higher education, and those fundamental requirements haven't changed. If students want to learn something like composition or film editing, they can watch instructional videos on the internet. They don't need to take classes in school to learn these things.
审题分析
1. 这个题重复了23年9月5日家考题目。
虽然内容比较新，但实际上还是属于传统的课程设置话题。在写作团day1就推送给相关的语料。写作团的同学写起来应该比较容易。
2."The question I want you to discuss is whether new, innovative subjects should be taught in public schools."
需要我们回答的问题是：是否新的，创新课程应该在公立学校里教授。
3. 但是题目中并没有告诉我们 new, innovative subjects 具体是什么课程。
我们可以从Paul 和 Kelly 的内容中获得一些启发, 他们列举了“how to create compelling and effective videos 制作视频” 和 “composition or film editing 写作或者电影剪辑” 所以就是时下比较流行的一些内容。大家可以按照这些内容分析，也可以再列举一些除了传统课程外的内容, 比如学习人工智能，编程，做pods 播客等等。
4. 可行的论点：
应该包括：
--有利于学生为未来的不断变化的工作市场准备/提升工作前景. 现在很多新兴工作出现，比如主播，人工智能engineer…都需要学生有这方面的技能。
--有利于学生取得出色的成绩。比起枯燥抽象的数学，语法等， 学生都喜欢学习一些跟他们日常生活相关新鲜事物，比如做视频等。当学生能够学习他们真正感兴趣的内容，他们也因此能学得更投入，更好。
不应该包括：
--影响学生主业的学习。学生的时间和精力有限，就会导致他们没有足够的时间去学更重要的数学，历史等。
--影响他们未来大学学习和找工作。因为目前申请大学主要还是看主流的传统课程的学术表现。工作雇主也希望雇佣有大学文凭的年轻人。所以学校花了很多时间教授这些创新课程，而忽略了传统课程，就会导致很多毕业生无法申请到好的大学，也面临这以后找不到好工作的危险。
👩🏻🏫：以上划横线的词汇都可以在写作团day1语料中找到相关表达。
参考范文:
Aligning with Paul'sview,I believe it is essential for schools to integrate innovative subjects into their curriculum. This is because these kinds of classes can prepare students well for the rapidly evolving future. Advancing technology, especially in the fields like artificial intelligence and digital communication, is poised to replace many professional roles in the near future. For example, AI technologies can perform complex tasks such as scheduling and medical diagnostics with remarkable accuracy. Those who ignore this trend may find themselves at risk of unemployment. Therefore, it is urgent for schools that aim to equip students with the necessary skills to thrive in the modern job market to.
It is tempting to think that, as Kelly has proposed, students can learn to grasp these skills in their spare time by watching teaching videos online. The sad truth is that not every student has access to the internet, not to mention advanced computers required for such subjects. Thus, if public schools are hesitant to step in, the gap between affluent students and disadvantaged students is doomed to widen in the era of the digital world.(181字)
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