1月18日雅思小作文8分范文 动态+静态 两柱状图应该怎么写

柱状图

The bar charts below show the percentage of males and females who enjoyed leisure time from 1996 to 2006, as well as the percentage of males and females visiting different places in 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

1、题目大意

下面的柱状图显示了1996年至2006年享受闲暇时间的男性和女性的百分比，以及2006年访问不同地方的男性和女性的百分比。

通过选择和报告主要特征来总结信息，并在相关情况下进行比较。

2、高分范文示例

开始段 - 改写题目：

The bar charts illustrate the changes in the percentage of men and women participating in leisure activities between 1996 and 2006, as well as their preferences for five types of leisure destinations (cinemas, pop centers, museums, KTV, and beaches) in 2006.

第一段 - 总结变化：

Overall, the proportion of men engaging in leisure activities declined, while the proportion of women increased. By 2006, the gap between the two genders had narrowed significantly. Regarding destination preferences, more men favored visiting pop centers and beaches, while women preferred beaches and cinemas.

第二段 - 描述左侧图表

As shown in the first chart, the proportion of men involved in leisure activities was notably high in 1996, close to 90%, but dropped to about 70% by 2006. In contrast, the participation rate for women started at a lower level but steadily rose over the decade, increasing from around 40% to 60%.

第三段 - 描述右侧图表

In terms of leisure destination preferences in 2006, as displayed in the second chart, there were some gender differences. Men were most likely to visit pop centers, with 30% choosing this option, double the proportion of women. Conversely, 25% of women visited cinemas, while only 10% of men did, less than half of the female proportion. Both men and women were attracted to beaches, with participation rates reaching 25% for men and 30% for women. The gender gap was similar for museums and KTV, with nearly 20% of both men and women attending museums, and close to 15% choosing KTV.

柱状图必备语料

a significant increase 显著增加

a steady decline 稳步下降

the proportion of ……的比例

a slight rise 略微上升

remain stable 保持稳定

experience a dramatic fall 经历急剧下降

peaked at 达到顶峰

reached a plateau 达到平台期（稳定）

a marginal difference 微小差异

showed a downward trend 显示出下降趋势