雅思写作8分范文：消极对待学习

报告类大作文，教育类话题

Many people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning. Why does this happen? How to solve the problem?

题目来源：2010年5月29日大陆雅思大作文

1、题目大意

许多离开学校的人对学习持消极态度。为什么会发生这种情况？如何解决这个问题？

2、思路解析

这是一道报告类大作文，聊的是消极对待学习的原因和解决办法。报告类文章结构比较简单，两个主体段，第一个主体段解释原因，第二个主体段回答解决办法。审题时候注意两点，一是题目限定讨论对象是离开学校的人“leave school”，即毕业或者辍学的人。二是题目重点在对学习的负面态度，而非学习本身的效果或方法。下面，老师带大家来看下具体观点和论据。

先来看原因，有两方面。

一是传统应试教育模式导致学习兴趣缺失。学生在校往往关注考试分数和答题技巧，而非知识本身的理解和应用。长期处于这种应试的学习环境中，学生容易对学习感到疲惫和厌倦，这种负面情绪进一步影响他们离开学校后对于学习的态度。

二是社会上缺乏终身学习的氛围和支持。许多人在离开校园后缺乏有效的学习平台和资源，同时工作压力和生活琐事也使得他们没有时间和精力投入到学习，进而导致人们对学习产生厌倦和消极态度。

再来看解决办法，可以对于前面提到的原因。

一方面，可以改变教育体系和教学方法，通过兴趣导向、个性化教学等方式，提升学生对于学习的兴趣和成就感，使学生不仅能掌握知识，更有动力进行长期学习，为离校后的学习打下基础。

另一方面，可以构建完善的终身学习和激励机制。政府和企业共同建设多样化的成人教育和培训体系，为各年龄段人群提供便捷的学习渠道与资源，如在线课程、职业技能培训班等。同时，可以通过税收减免、补贴和认证奖励等方式激励成年人不断提升自己的知识和技能。

3、提纲

4、高分范文示例

In contemporary society, education is regarded as a stepping stone to a better life. However, there is a harsh reality that many young people are dissatisfied with their education system and even drop out of school. This essay will analyze the causes of this alarming phenomenon and suggest several feasible measures.

The first cause of complaints about education can be attributed to the unreasonable curriculum. Bombarded with vast amounts of theoretical knowledge, the majority of students fail to comprehend and apply what they have learned. Furthermore, the boring lessons of exam-oriented education greatly dampen young people's enthusiasm, discouraging them from learning. Another factor may be the wrong approach to education. For instance, teachers with relatively conservative views often impose harsh penalties on students' minor mistakes, including verbal abuse and physical punishment. These practices burden young people with high levels of mental stress. Consequently, it is common for some of them to develop a negative attitude towards schooling.

Several remedies are needed to alleviate this issue. Instead of making students memorize obscure theories, it is necessary to add more practical elements to the curriculum. In addition, extracurricular activities and art subjects should be given more importance, which will not only ease students' tension but also help them thrive holistically. Moreover, schools need to strengthen training and supervision for faculty, constantly introducing advanced teaching methods.

In conclusion, the widespread issue of students viewing education negatively stems from various factors. Efforts should be made to ensure that students develop a positive attitude towards school.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

Contemporary society 当代社会

Stepping stone 垫脚石

Harsh reality 残酷的现实

Dissatisfied with 对…不满意

Drop out of school 辍学

Causative factors 致因

Alarming phenomenon 令人担忧的现象

Feasible measures 可行措施

Unreasonable curriculum 不合理的课程设置

Bombarded with 被…轰炸

Theoretical knowledge 理论知识

Exam-oriented education 应试教育

Dampen enthusiasm 挫伤热情

Wrong approach to education 错误的教育方法

Harsh penalties 严厉惩罚

Mental stress 精神压力

Negative attitude towards 对…的消极态度

Practical elements 实践内容

Extracurricular activities 课外活动

Advanced teaching methods 先进的教学方法