今天推送的是3月15日·上午·托福·考题分析.以下思路和范文仅供同学们学习·参考。
第1套
整体难度：中等
综合写作回忆
命中【写作冲刺团-day8原题】
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这也是今年写作团第4次命中原题！
开头段：阅读提到了3个理论theories advanced by历史学家们about古埃及王国collapse的。但是，听力认为这些理论都有问题problem。
1:阅读认为the revolt of the governors 导致了王国的崩溃。听力提供了新的信息来质疑challenge这个理论。因为有substantial rewards 给for loyal governors. 所以，即使even if they revolted, governors would not have had too much to gain. In any cases, 有中央army能could crush governors who 想要tried to revolt.
2: A second theory concerns changes in rainfall and their probable effect on Egypt's food supply. 但是听力指出了其中的问题，那份documents来自region is east to Egypt, 跟古埃及有着has不同的weather systems. 所以有可能那个地方是it might have been a drought，但是古埃及还是有had 很多降雨。
3： A third theory is that the collapse was caused by a fight over succession to the throne of the Old Kingdom. 但是，听力认为这个理论is not believable, 因为有similar cases，并没有导致崩溃. 毕竟，the last major Pharaoh 并不是was not the only long living Pharaoh. 还曾经有一个不同的Pharaoh, 活到96岁，也留下儿子争夺王位.
学术讨论写作
Doctor Diaz:Long school breaks offer students a valuable opportunity to rest and recharge. However, some educators believe that schools should assign work during these breaks to help students stay engaged with theilstudies and retain knowledge, What do you think? Should schools assign homework during long school breaks？
Kelly:I think schools should assian some homework during long breaks. but itshould be work that interests students and isn't boring. This way students can stay engaged and reinforce what they've learned withoutfeeling overwhelmed, This keeps learning fun while still helping themretain important knowledge durina the break.Andrew:I don't think schools should assign homework during long breaksbecause if students run into problems, they won't have access toteachers for help lf a student is struggling with a math problem andhas no one to explain it, they might waste a lot of time without learninganything.
@173期E；@170期
西一. 这道题重复了24年8月17日题目。难度中等。
很多同学都有在开学前狂补作业的经历，所以对这个题目应该有很多内容可以写。
(2). 可行的分论点：
应该留作业：
- 巩固之前学习印象.solidify/consolidate
- 有利于让假期更有意义Instructive. 比如让学生去做一些参观博物馆，制作一些小的工艺品…
不应该留作业：
- 不利于学生放松。学生都已经学了一个学期了，已经很累了。还要做作业，就无法好好放松。比如家人本来安排了长途旅行，结果因为要完成作业，所以玩得不开心/放弃了旅行。
- 给父母增加了负担。老师布置的一些任务，比如参观博物馆等，都需要父母带领。而父母没有假期，就需要请假….
参考范文：
In agreement with Claire’s perspective, I firmly believe that teachers should assign homework during long breaks to make these periods more instructive and beneficial, particularly for students from disadvantaged backgrounds.
Without structured activities, students might waste their valuable time on unproductive entertainment. For instance, boys might spend entire vacations playing video games in isolation, while girls could become absorbed in browsing YouTube or TikTok, following celebrity news. These activities contribute little to their development.
This is where thoughtful assignments can make a significant impact. Teachers, with their deep understanding of educational content and student development, can design meaningful projects that not only engage students but also enrich their learning experience. For example, my high school teacher once assigned us to document the growth of a puppy through daily journal entries. This task was so captivating that I eagerly attended to my dog each day, noting every detail. It not only expanded my knowledge of animals but also fostered a sense of responsibility.
Therefore, it is prudent and responsible for teachers to assign tasks during long breaks, ensuring that students use their time productively.
第2套
难度：难
综合写作回忆
哺乳动物有P和M两种（配袋鼠的图片）袋鼠有pounch，M适应能力比P更弱，给了三个原因，
1）M在妈妈肚子里发育时间短，发育不完全
2）M不能控制自己体温
3）P和M都居住在澳大利亚，M在和P的competition中不能successful to survive
@176期shu.
学术讨论写作
教授：All governments must make difficult decisionsabout how to spend their money and whichprojects to prioritize in place of others. Forexample, some governments have programs thatfocus on space exploration.
They spend greatsums of money to train astronauts and buildspacecraft that can travel beyond Earth'satmosphere. Do you think that space explorationis a good use of a government's money andresources? Why or why not?Kelly:I don't think that governments should fund space exploration because it will be too costly to build spaceships and develop related technologies.
Though space exploration tech costs billions, it doesn't offer direct benefits to most people, which makes its funding a controversial issue.
Andrew:University education is a superior choice due to its comprehensive and specialized nature. While certification programs offer quick training, universities provide a more in-depth understanding of a subject. They encourage critical thinking, research skills, and a broader knowledge base. University degrees often lead to higher earning potential and career opportunities.
审题注意点:
(1). 这道题重复了刚考过的25年3月1日的原题。这道题的考题分析老师在公众号里第一时间推送过，看过的老师公众号的同学应该幸运了。
(2). 审题注意点：
1.Do you think that governments should fund space exploration? Why or why not?比较传统的利弊题型。
2. government fund:联系团里讲解的政府投资思路/语料。
👩🏻🏫：这个题目从正面去写space travel的内容，需要有大量的知识储备，反而从政府角度会容易一些。
3. space travel:满足人类的好奇心。
4. space exploration:比如探索金星，火星上是否有生命，他们是如何变成现在这样的。是否有人类需要的资源：能源，空间资源。人类是否可以移民过去….
参考提纲一：
我同意kelly的观点。探索外太空会给政府带来沉重的经济负担。因为太空探索需要庞大的资金投入。比如，仅仅是修造一个太空飞船就需要上万的科学家，工程师和工人来多年的投入。
但是，另一方面，政府的资金是有限的。如果花了大量的资金在太空探索上，就没有足够的资金来投入其他更重要，更紧急的项目，比如教育，医疗和就业。所以，我觉得这不是一个好的政策。
参考提纲二：
我觉得这是一个好政策。投资外太空有利于现在的人类。比如，很多用于太空的科技也可以用于现在。比如纳米材料，做航天服的材料可以用在极端环境下工作的人类，比如沙漠和极地地区。
参考范文：
I agree with Kelly's perspective that governments should not allocate funds to space exploration.First, these ventures require massive financial investment, often running into billions, which would unduly strain a government's budget.For instance,developing a single advanced spaceship involves the collective expertise of numerous scientists, engineers, and builders, working for years and requiring highly specialized equipment and materials.
Second, the issue of budget constraints.Governments operateon limited budgetsand mustprioritize sectorsthat directly impact the well-being of their citizens,such as education, healthcare, and environmental protection. Allocating significant funds to space projects would inevitably mean reducing investment in these critical areas. This would have real-life implications;for instance,underfunded educational systems could affect the future prospects of young people relying on student loans, and insufficient healthcare could endanger the lives of vulnerable populations.
In conclusion, although space exploration is an exciting endeavor, it should not be a priority for government funding, given the immediate needs and financial constraints faced by most nations.Therefore, it is prudent for governments to defer such ambitious projects until more urgent needs are met.
这一套的阅读，团员的反馈也很好：
第3套
难度：中等
综合写作回忆
金星上的Ashen Light形成的三种理论
1. 原文：太阳紫外线和金星大气层反应，一个氧原子形成两个氧原子的时候会产生这种光 听力：这种化学反应观测到的光应该是yellow或golden而不是观测到的green；
2. 原文：可能是storm产生的闪电；听力：storm多聚集在进行的day-side，但是观测到的Ashen Light在night-side，而且storm太weak不足以形成Ashen Light；
3. 原文：可能是望远镜有flaw，听力：很多天文学家在不同的地方用不同望远镜都看到Ashen Light了，不可能是望远镜的问题）
@171期no.
学术讨论写作
教授：人们更愿意选择place to live的地方去工作, 还是work environment好的公司工作。Claire暂缺Paul暂缺审题注意点:(1). 这道题应该是道新题。不过还需要同学们更精准地回忆。 希望考到的同学在下方留言区回忆，帮助老师校准题目哦。
(2). 审题注意点：
1. 这是一道关于，选择工作，的选择题。 难度系数中等。
2. work environment好：题目中应该对此进行了定义，因为“ work environment好”包含了很多方面：比如工作设备，公司文化，薪资待遇等等。
好处是：
- 有利于工作职业发展。比如一个好的公司可以提供更多的培训，晋升机会等。虽然这些公司位于大城市，比如上海，硅谷，香港，房租等虽然高，但是薪水和发展很多，吸引了很多人去。
- 有利于提升工作满意度。比如，公司比较自由，尊重年轻人，不加班，也会提升工作满意度 job satisfaction.
3. place to live:应该指的是“方便生活”的地方工作。这里同学回忆不够清晰，应该指的的是： 居住环境（比如设施齐全的小区），生活质量，舒适感，生活成本等。
好处很明显：
- 有利于生活幸福。比如很多人喜欢住在温暖的沿海城市，比如厦门，三亚等。
也比如有家庭或孩子的地方，会选择去一个不是繁忙的商业城市，而是去一个有好学校，低犯罪率的地方。
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