教你如何从特朗普的演讲中汲取雅思经验

特朗普,美国第45任及第47任总统,以直言不讳的作风和“美国优先”政策闻名。

今天,我们从雅思的角度出发,看看能从他回应拉斯维加斯枪击案的演讲中汲取哪些雅思经验?

Thank you.

My fellow Americans, we are joined together today in sadness, shock, andgrief(悲伤).

Last night a gunman opened fire on a large crowd at a country music concert in Las Vegas, Nevada. Hebrutally(残忍地)murdered more than 50 people and wounded hundreds more.

It was an act of pure evil.

The FBI and the Department of Homeland Security are working closely with local authorities to assist with theinvestigation(调查)and they will provide updates as to the investigation and how it develops.

I want to thank the Las Vegas Metropolitan Police department and all of the first responders for their courageous efforts and for helping to save the lives of so many. The speed with which they acted ismiraculous(奇迹般的)and prevented further loss of life. To have found the shooter so quickly after the first shots were fired, is something for which we will always be thankful and grateful. It shows what trueprofessionalism(专业主义)is all about.

Hundreds of our fellow citizens are nowmourning(悼念)the sudden loss of a loved one, a parent, a child, a brother or sister. We cannotfathom(深刻理解)their pain, we cannot imagine their loss. To the families of the victims, we are praying for you and we are here for you. And we ask God to help see you through this very dark period.

Scripture(圣经)teaches us the Lord is close to the brokenhearted and saves those who are crushed in spirit. We seek comfort in those words, for we know that God lives in the hearts of those who grieve. To the wounded who are now recovering in hospitals, we are praying for your full and speedy recovery, andpledge(保证)to you our support from this day forward.

In memory of the fallen, I have directed that our great flag be flown athalf-staff(半旗). I will be visiting Las Vegas on Wednesday to meet with law enforcement, first responders, and the families of the victims. In moments of tragedy and horror, America comes together as one. And it always has.

We call upon the bonds that unite us, our faith, our family, and our shared values. We call upon the bonds of citizenship, the ties of community, and the comfort of our common humanity. Our unity cannot beshattered(破坏)by evil, our bonds cannot be broken by violence, and though we feel such great anger, at the senseless murder of our fellow citizens, it is our love that defines us today. And always will. Forever.

In times such as these, I know we are searching for some kind of meaning in thechaos(混乱), some kind of light in the darkness. The answers do not come easy. But we can takesolace(安慰)knowing that even the darkest space can be brightened by a single light and even the most terrible despair can be illuminated by a single ray of hope.

Melania and I are praying for every American who has been hurt, wounded or lost the ones they loved so dearly in this terrible, terrible attack. We pray for the entire nation to find unity and peace, and we pray for the day when evil isbanished(驱逐)and the innocent are safe fromhatred(仇恨)and from fear.

May God bless the souls of the lives that are lost, may God give us the grace of healing and may God provide the grieving families with strength to carry on. Thank you. God bless America. Thank you.

以上是特朗普演讲原文,下面就和大家一起,在这篇演讲中汲取雅思学习经验。

词汇

Lexical Resource

用词简单但有效

特朗普的词汇以基础-中级为主(CET-4到6级水平),例如:

sadness, shock, grief, brutal, miraculous, professionalism, fathom, pledge, solace。

亮点词汇

  • fathom their pain 理解他们的痛苦
  • crushed in spirit 精神崩溃
  • illuminated by hope 被希望照亮

——这些短语体现了对情感的精准描述,符合雅思写作/口语中对“词汇多样性”的要求(6.5分以上)。

重复问题

多次使用very dark period, terrible, pray,缺乏同义替换(如devastating, horrific, mourn等),在雅思中可能扣分(词汇分约6.0)。

💡雅思建议

✅在写作和口语中,避免重复简单词,例如:terrible→horrific,devastating,unbearable

✅学习特朗普的情感表达短语(如crushed in spirit),但需增加学术词汇(如trauma, resilience)以冲刺高分。

💡有话说

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语法

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

句式结构简单

  • 以短句和并列句为主,例如:"We cannot fathom their pain, we cannot imagine their loss."
  • 少量复杂句:"The speed with which they acted is miraculous..."(定语从句,雅思7分以上需更多此类结构)。
  • 语法错误极少:符合雅思对高准确度的要求(7分以上需更多样化的从句、虚拟语气等)。

💡雅思建议

✅在写作中,交替使用简单句、复合句、强调句(如It is our love that defines us)。

✅口语中可以模仿特朗普的短句节奏,但写作需增加复杂句式(如条件句:Had the police not acted swiftly, more lives would have been lost.)。

💡有话说

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连贯与衔接

Coherence & Cohesion

逻辑清晰但衔接显性

  • 通过重复关键词(pray, bonds, unity)和过渡短语(In times such as these...)连接段落,符合雅思口语的流畅性要求(6.5分)。
  • 写作对比:雅思高分作文需更多隐性衔接(如代词指代、逻辑副词hence, thereby)。

💡雅思建议

✅口语中可学习特朗普的情感递进技巧(从描述事件→呼吁团结→升华主题)。

✅写作中需减少重复,改用代词、同义替换和逻辑连接词(如Furthermore, Consequently)。

💡有话说

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那么我们如何用特朗普风格提升雅思呢?

📌口语Part 2

学习他的故事结构(事件→影响→升华),例如描述一场自然灾害。

📌写作开头/结尾

模仿情感号召力(如"Our unity cannot be shattered by...")。

📌避免问题

减少重复词,增加数据或例子(如"Over 50 lives were lost, equivalent to...")

雅思的学习经验可以来自生活的每一处小细节,特朗普的这场演讲便是生动例证。

学习语言本就是一场漫长的旅程,途中的每一份经历都是宝贵财富。

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