今天，给大家带来一个IELTS雅思地理变迁小作文(比如：在一段时间里，一个城镇发生的变化)的原创范文。
老规矩，以下是正文目录：
1，题目
2，Mac范文
3，范文朗读
4，范文解析
题目：
The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
- Model Answer 高分范文 -
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The maps compare the city of Nelson in the year 2000 and now after undergoing several changes.
Overall, the town has witnessed changes to its transportation system and has also seen the addition of new amenities such as a shopping center and a new market.
Lying south of the city center, the port-side road that ran parallel to the shore, has been converted into pedestrian use only, allowing access for visitors to the port to the new bars, clubs, and restaurants that have been developed in this area over the last twenty years. A tramline has also been added to the town, connecting the city center to the university. The university itself has also constructed a dormitory for students.
Furthermore, in the north, east of the university, the new shopping center has been developed in lieu of the forested area that previously existed, meanwhile, situated to the south, and east of the city center, a new covered market has been erected, taking place of the old market on the west side of the city, which has now been transformed into a shop.
Finally, the train station has been relocated from the west side to the middle of the town, just north of the city center that now has a bicycle renting scheme.
- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
Standard Task 1 Phrases 雅思小作文地道表达积累：
- The maps compare 地图对比了
- in the year 2000
- several changes 几个变化
- Overall, 总体来说
- has witnessed 目睹了
- has also seen the addition of
- lying south of the 在……的南端
- ran parallel to 跟……平行
- has been converted into 被转换成了
- have been developed 被开发
- has also been added 增加了
- , connecting 连接着
- constructed 建造
- in the north 在北边
- east of 在……东边
- has been developed 被开发
- in lieu of 取代；代替
- previously existed 之前存在的
- situated to the south 在……南边
- east of 在……东边
- has been erected 被建造
- taking place of 取代
- on the west side of 在……西边has now been transformed into 被改造成了
Vocabulary 高分地道词汇:
- addition of 添加
- converted into 转变成；改造成
- developed 开发
- added 添加
- constructed 建造
- erected 树立；建造
- transformed into 改造成
- relocated 搬迁
Cohesion (C&C words and phrases) 把这些简单的词用好，在"连贯与衔接"方面轻松拿分：
- after
- Overall,
- and
- also
- such as
- Laying
- that
- , allowing
- this
- over the last twenty years
- , connecting
- itself
- Furthermore,
- , meanwhile
- , which
- Finally,
- that now
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