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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annualincome in 2007,2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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1、题目大意

下图显示了2007年、2011年和2015年美国家庭年收入的数量。通过选择和报告主要特征来总结信息，并在相关地方进行比较。

2、高分范文示例

开头段 - 改写题目

The bar chart delineates the variation in the number of American households categorized by their annual income for the years 2007, 2011, and 2015.

主体段1 - 2007年数据

In the year 2007, the most populous category was that of households earning an annual income of $100,000 or more, with the count approximating 30 million. This was succeeded by the bracket of $25,000-$49,999, followed by households earning less than $25,000, then the $50,000-$74,999 group, and lastly, the $75,000-$99,999 bracket, which comprised around 15 million households.

主体段2 - 2011年数据

A noteworthy redistribution was observed by 2011. The bracket of $25,000-$49,999 emerged as the most populous group, encompassing around 30 million households. Intriguingly, the category of $100,000 or more witnessed a decline to around 27 million, even falling beneath the less than $25,000 group. The $75,000-$99,999 bracket persistently remained the least populous group, with the number of households even experiencing a decrease compared to 2007.

主体段3 - 2015年数据

By the year 2015, the category of $100,000 or more regained its position as the most populous group, with the count approximating 33 million households. Both the categories of less than $25,000 and $25,000-$49,999 witnessed a marginal decrease compared to 2011. The $75,000-$99,999 bracket consistently remained the least populous group, barely reaching the 15 million mark.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

delineates the variation in   描绘变化。

categorized by their annual income   根据年收入进行分类。

the most populous category   最多的类别。

with the count approximating   数量大约在。

A noteworthy redistribution   值得注意的重新分配。

emerged as the most populous group   成为最大的群体。

witnessed a decline   出现下降。

falling beneath   下降至……以下。

persistently remained   持续保持。

regained its position   重新获得其位置。

witnessed a marginal decrease   出现了微小的减少。

barely reaching   勉强达到。