雅思大作文7分范文及解析：无法预防犯罪

观点类大作文，犯罪类话题

Crime is a problem all over the world and there is nothing that can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

题目来源：2009年12月19日大陆雅思大作文

1、题目大意

犯罪是世界各地的一个问题，我们无法采取任何措施来预防它。您是否同意？

2、思路解析

这是一道观点类大作文，聊的是犯罪预防的问题。如何预防犯罪是犯罪类话题中非常基础的一个内容，审题的时候需要注意一点，观点中前半句不需要进行论证，重心在后半句“there is nothing that can be done to prevent it”，即是否同意没有办法能预防犯罪。另外，由于观点本身包含绝对词“nothing”，因此从反对角度切入会更好写。下面，王珍老师带大家来看下具体观点。

首先来看赞同的角度，有两方面。

一方面犯罪根源复杂难以根除：犯罪现象是由多种复杂因素导致的，包括经济不平等、社会不公、教育资源分配不均等问题。这些深层次的社会问题难以在短时间内得到有效解决，因此预防犯罪也显得尤为困难。

另一方面全球化背景下的跨国犯罪难以控制。随着全球化的发展，跨国犯罪、网络犯罪日益增多，这些新型犯罪形式跨越国界，使得各国执法机构难以处理，增加了预防和打击犯罪的难度。例如，现在的网络诈骗往往采取跨国进行，传统的预防措施难以奏效。

再来看可以预防的角度，有三个点。

一是可以采用公平公正的法律制度和惩罚措施。对于罪犯的严格惩罚能够增加犯罪的成本，威慑潜在的犯罪分子。

二是科技进步又能协助犯罪预防。随着科技的发展，许多高新技术被用于犯罪预防和侦查中，如视频监控，能够有效减少违法者的侥幸心理，遏制潜在的犯罪。

三是提供更多的教育资源和就业机会，可以有效地减少犯罪率。教育不仅可以提高个人的道德观和自我约束力，而且可以通过提供更好的就业机会来减少因贫困和失业引起的犯罪。

3、提纲

4、高分范文示例

The specter of crime, a universal concern that has ensnared nations across the globe in its shadowy grasp, is often viewed as an unstoppable force. While the prospect of entirely obliterating crime may seem as elusive as capturing a wisp of smoke, I maintain that there exists a plethora of strategies that can be enacted to significantly mitigate this issue.

Governments, as the vanguards of societal order, bear the critical duty of leading the charge against the ceaseless tide of crime. Firstly, through the establishment of stringent laws paired with stern penalties, such as incarceration or monetary fines, they can instill a palpable sense of trepidation in potential lawbreakers. This deterrent effect may coax them to reconsider their actions, casting a moment of hesitation before they plunge into the abyss of criminality. Yet, it is crucial to note that a significant portion of crimes are birthed from the desperation of economic hardship and resource scarcity, from the frantic struggle for a secure shelter, potable water, and sufficient nourishment. Thus, the subsequent step should be the enhancement of social safety nets. By striving to bridge the chasm of income disparity, eradicate the gnawing blight of poverty, and ensure the provision of essential amenities, the government can assuage the desperation that often fuels criminal behavior.

However, the war against crime is not one to be fought by governments alone. Various societal actors, too, have pivotal roles to play in this battle. Primarily, many unlawful deeds germinate from mental health issues, often embedded deep within the psyche due to childhood experiences within familial and educational environments. Parents and educators, therefore, must nurture the seeds of mental wellbeing in children, and underscore the importance of moral education. Moreover, the digital age, with its unchecked troves of information, often leads to impressionable youth being swayed by violent or criminal portrayals. Hence, media agencies bear the responsibility of rigorously monitoring their content to prevent such misguidance. Finally, social organizations can act as the bridge towards social reintegration for former prisoners, offering employment and volunteer opportunities to counteract the allure of reoffending borne out of societal ostracization.

In conclusion, while the eradication of crime may seem an insurmountable task, given its roots in diverse factors, a multifaceted approach involving various societal actors can significantly dent its prevalence. The battle against crime is a complex tapestry woven with threads of governmental action, societal contribution, and individual responsibility, and with concerted effort, we can hope to see the shadow of crime recede.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

Specter of crime   犯罪的幽灵

Unstoppable force   不可阻挡的力量

Elusive as capturing a wisp of smoke   如捕雾般难以捉摸

Vanguards of societal order   社会秩序的先锋

Ceaseless tide of crime   无休止的犯罪潮

Plunge into the abyss of criminality   投入犯罪的深渊

Birthed from desperation   出于绝望而生

Bridge the chasm of income disparity   弥合收入差距的鸿沟

Gnawing blight of poverty   侵蚀的贫困之疾

Provision of essential amenities   提供基本设施

Unlawful deeds germinate   非法行为的萌芽

Impressionable youth being swayed   易受影响的青少年的动摇

Rigorously monitoring their content   严格监控他们的内容

Social reintegration for former prisoners   对前囚犯的社会重新融合

Allure of reoffending   重新犯罪的诱惑

Eradication of crime   消除犯罪