写作团有同学向老师问到一个很有代表性问题,如图:
其实这个句子最大的问题还不是can和be able to, 它有多处明显的错误。
1. high income employment
income是指人或公司等的收入,用来修饰收入端的对象,比如high-income individuals/ companies: 较高收入个人/公司。这里用well-paid employment才合适。这属于搭配的问题。
2.employees:是已经被雇佣的人,这里应该是找工作的人job seekers或job hunters。
3.can not: 一般写成cannot,不分开。
4.workfore market:这两个词不会连用。workforce指的是(国家或行业的)劳动力,劳动人口。年轻的求职者进入的是job market,相反,雇佣单位才是寻找workforce。
5.a large amountof people: amount不能跟people连用,应该是a large number of people。
接下来聊聊can和be able to应该怎么替换。
1.用同义词,最简单
be capable ofdoing; have the ability to do.
例:Staff shouldbe educated so that they can giveinformed advice.
替: Staff shouldbe educated so that theyare capable ofgiving informed advice.staff是集合名词(类似于people),不加 s.
2. 意译,根据牛津词典的解释图一: can
例:Staff shouldbe educated so that they can giveinformed advice.替: Staff shouldbe educated so that
it is possible for them togiveinformed advice.
图二: able
例:Staff shouldbe educated so that they can giveinformed advice.
替: Staff shouldbe educated so that theyhave thenecessary knowledgetogiveinformed advice.
例:Alarge number of people are notable to find adecent job.
替: A large number of peopledo nothave the opportunity tofind a decent job.
3. 近义词替换
manage to do; succeed in doing; be successful in doing.
例:A large number of people are not able to find a decent job.are notable to就可以用succeed的反义词fail替换。
换: Alarge number of peoplefail tofind a decent job.
4. 去人称化
例: Alarge number of people are notable to find adecent job.
替:Findingadecent job is diffcult for a large number ofpeople.
例: People can perform everydaytasks, such asshopping,banking andbusiness transactions on the Internet.
替:Performing everyday tasks,such as shopping, banking and business transations, on the Internet is acommon activityfor people.
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