外刊中值得学习的文章写作结构分享

这是过去一周我们外刊解析的值得模仿的写作结构：

让步 + 转折 的文章结构

# P2 让步段 At first blush, there’s nothing all that amazing about Pal’s.....

P3 转折  Dig deeper and you see that...

# On the surface + 自己不认同的让步观点….. But if you dig a little deeper,….+ 自己观点

# Certainly 表示让步

Certainly, as Pletter noted, kids don’t really need the help of a digital device to gaze at their reflections or familiarize themselves with their face; after all, kids got along just fine for millennia without selfies. But…

引入观点和例子

# 引观点的方式

As Lene Rachel Andersen and Tomas Bjorkman put it in their book “The Nordic Secret,” “Bildung is the way that the individual matures and takes upon him or herself ever bigger personal responsibility towards family, friends, fellow citizens, society, humanity, our globe, and the global heritage of our species, while enjoying ever bigger personal, moral and existential freedoms.”

# 引出不同意见

But not without pushback. … 但不是没有反对声音 + 不同观点内容

# 引入例子的方式

观点 + Research on experiential avoidance backs this up,… + 例子

# 引入例子的方式

观点. + This dovetails with (符合) the finding that + 句子证据

# part of …… part of 引出理由

My connection to the food, though, feels completely authentic. Part of this stems from food’s special power as the most accessible of cultural touchstones. But part of it is that this is what I ate as a child, what I genuinely grew up with, because of who my mom is, even if she, and these dishes, originated somewhere thousands of miles away.

引入总结内容

# 例子结束以后的总结 

The most obvious takeaway would be that

# In short 最后一段总结词

In short, the broad forces hitting retail are more a lesson in economics than in the power of disruptive technology. It’s a lesson all retailers will have to learn someday — even the mighty Amazon.

并列的结构好美

# 并列结构会提高易读性

- Remembering these altruistic intentions helps me reach common ground with the parents who call the Office of Family Engagement to complain that their daughters are unable to register for their preferred classes, are intimidated by their professors, are not happy with the water pressure in the dorm showers, are worried their roommates don’t like them or are dissatisfied with the food options on campus.

- For people such as Mongeon, the art teacher, they …. For a lot of people, they …. For a generation,…