No.1 普林斯顿大学 Princeton University
普林斯顿大学目前还未公布2023-2024年的附加文书题目。
但普林斯顿大学非常看重学生的英语学术写作能力。因为除了附加文书的要求,普林斯顿大学都会有一个Graded Written Paper。
顾名思义,就是一篇由学生独立写作的,带有老师分数或者评级的,选自课内的课程作业或考试论文,但是必须符合学术写作要求的作文。
通过评价申请者们的Graded Written Paper,大学招生官们可以客观、准确地评估他们在学术领域的书面表达能力。
普林斯顿大学对这份文书做出了四个要求:
☆这篇文章一定是申请者在高中课内阶段写的,最好是英语课、社会科学课或历史课程的相关论文。
☆申请者可以提交课程论文、研究论文或考试论文,只对说明性写作感兴趣,而不是创造性写作。
☆1 - 2 页的篇幅就足够了。
☆该论文必须包括老师的评分和点评意见。
NO.2 麻省理工学院Massachusetts Institute of Technology
MIT暂时没有公布2023-2024年的附加文书题目。
NO.3 哈佛大学Harvard University
哈佛大学2023-2024附加文书简答题(Short Essay Prompts)已经公布。
与去年自定义主题进行写作不同,2023-2024哈佛大学要求申请者回答五个简单题(short answer ),每个不超过200字,最多1000字。
1. Harvard has long recognized the importance of enrolling a diverse student body. How will the life experiences that shape who you are today enable you to contribute to Harvard? (200 words)
哈佛大学早就认识到招收多元化学生群体的重要性。塑造了今天的你的人生经历将如何帮助你为哈佛做出贡献?
2. Briefly describe an intellectual experience that was important to you. (200 words)
简要描述一次对你来说很重要的智力体验经历。
3. Briefly describe any of your extracurricular activities, employment experience, travel, or family responsibilities that have shaped who you are. (200 words)
简要描述塑造您身份的任何课外活动、工作经历、旅行或家庭责任。
4. How do you hope to use your Harvard education in the future? (200 words)
您希望将来如何利用您在哈佛所接受的教育?
5. Top 3 things your roommates might like to know about you. (200 words)
你的室友可能会想了解关于你的三件事。
NO.3 斯坦福大学Stanford University
斯坦福大学公布了2023-2024年附加文书题目。
所有斯坦福大学的一年级申请者都必须完成3道斯坦福特有的短文Short Essays(每篇文章100至250字),其中第3道是今年的新题目,简答题Short Questions第五题也发生了变化。
Short Essays:
1. The Stanford community is deeply curious and driven to learn in and out of the classroom. Reflect on an idea or experience that makes you genuinely excited about learning. (100 to 250 words)
斯坦福大学的学生群体非常好奇,他们渴望在课堂内外学习。反思一个让你对学习真正感到兴奋的想法或经历。
解析:写好这个题的关键是必须非常具体, 阐述某个idea or experience怎样激发你的好奇心,你继续进行了什么探索,收获是什么;避免使用过于华丽的语言。
2. Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate – and us – know you better.
斯坦福大学几乎所有的本科生都住在校园里。给你未来的室友写张便条,写一些关于你的事情,或者能帮助你的室友——还有我们——更好地了解你。
解析:如果你曾经历的重大疾病或磨难想要把此经历告诉室友,那么这个note可以写的严肃一些,否则还是建议随意一点写,用一种轻松的方式把自己介绍给室友,最好能体现一定的幽默感。
可以通过几个故事或经历来呈现自己的性格,爱好,特点,注意的是要把真实的自己呈现出来,不要尝试去构建一个完全积极正能量但实际并不是自己的人。
3.Please describe what aspects of your life experiences, interests and character would help you make a distinctive contribution as an undergraduate to Stanford University. *New this year
请描述您的生活经历、兴趣和性格的哪些方面将帮助您作为斯坦福大学的本科生做出独特的贡献。这是今年的新题目
斯坦福大学还要求申请者完成几个简短的回答Short Questions(最多50字)
1. What is the most significant challenge that society faces today?
当今社会当前面临的最大挑战是什么?
解析:尽量避免一些过于老套的答案,比如全球变暖,人口老龄化,男女不平等。建议更加具体地阐述这一挑战,比如STEM领域内的男女失衡,然后简单提供建议或者解决方案。
2. How did you spend your last two summers?
过去两个暑假你是怎样度过的?
解析:有两种方式去写这个题目。一是按时间顺序罗列自己在假期做过的所有事情。二是描述自己认为重要的活动以及他们对自己成长的影响。不论采用哪种形式,重要的是展现自己的经历背景和兴趣。
3. What historical moment or event do you wish you could have witnessed?
你希望亲眼目睹什么历史时刻或事件?
解析:如果你不能很快的想到某个你感兴趣的历史时刻,那么建议你回忆历史课学过的内容去寻找自己感兴趣的话题。
注意的是匹配你整个申请呈现的兴趣和爱好。比如,你计划申请engineering,此题写自己对埃及文化感兴趣,想亲眼目睹金字塔是如何建成的,古代的工程是如何运用的,既体现了自己的好奇心也侧面印证了自己对engineering的兴趣。
4. Briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities, a job you hold, or responsibilities you have for your family.
简单地阐述你的一项课外活动,你从事的一项工作,或者你对家庭的一项责任。
解析:因为字数的限制,选取的这个活动应该是对自己意义重大。注意避免平铺直叙自己的职责,最好是能有一件具体的事例能够体现自己的特点或者价值观,或者是深刻的影响了自己。
比如写领导力 ,我们可以写一个具体的事例来体现自己对领导力的认识思考;比如写自己对音乐的热爱,可以写音乐怎样影响了自己对文化的理解。
5. List five things that are important to you.
列出对你来说重要的五件事。
NO.3 耶鲁大学Yale University
今年耶鲁大学的附加文书题目发生了一些改变:
1、简答题第二题和第三题更换了新的题目。
2、必答文书第一道题目和第二道题目发生了细微的改变,新增了第三题。
耶鲁大学针对不同的申请平台有不同的文书要求。首先,对所有平台的申请者,都需回答的问题有3个:
简答题Short Answer Questions
1.Students at Yale have time to explore their academic interests before committing to one or more major fields of study. Many students either modify their original academic direction or change their minds entirely. As of this moment, what academic areas seem to fit your interests or goals most comfortably?Please indicate up to three from the list provided.
耶鲁大学的学生在致力于一个或多个主要学术领域之前,有足够的时间探索他们的学术兴趣。许多学生要么修改他们原来的学术方向,要么完全改变。到目前为止,哪些学术领域最适合您的兴趣或目标?请从提供的列表中指出,最多三个。
2.Tell us about a topic or idea that excites you and is related to one or more academic areas you selected above. Why are you drawn to it?(200 words or fewer)
告诉我们一个与你上面选择的一个或多个学术领域相关的让你兴奋的话题或想法。告诉我们你为什么被它吸引?(200字以内)
3.What is it about Yale that has led you to apply?(125 words or fewer)
你申请耶鲁的原因是什么?(125字以内)
Coalition App或者 Common App的申请人,还需要再回答以下简答题:(200字符,约35个单词以内)
1. What inspires you?
什么在启发你?(人、事情...)
2. If you could teach any college course, write a book, or create an original piece of art of any kind, what would it be?
如果你能教一门大学课程,写一本书,或者创作一件原创艺术作品,那会是什么?
3. Other than a family member, who is someone who has had a significant influence on you? What has been the impact of their influence?
除了家庭成员,谁是对你有重大影响的人?他们的影响是什么?
4. What is something about you that is not included anywhere else in your application?
在你的申请中,有哪些方面是其他地方没有提及的?
Essays
提交Coalition Application或Common Application的申请人需要回答以下问题之一,字数不超过400字。
1. Reflect on a time you discussed an issue important to you with someone holding an opposing view. Why did you find the experience meaningful?
回想一次你和持相反观点的人讨论对你来说很重要的问题。为什么你觉得这段经历很有意义?
2. Reflect on your membership in a community to which you feel connected. Why is this community meaningful to you? You may define community however you like.
回想一下你在一个与你联系紧密的社区中的成员身份。为什么这个社区对你有意义?你可以根据自己的喜好定义社区。
3. Reflect on an element of your personal experience that you feel will enrich your college. How has it shaped you?
回想你个人经历中你认为会丰富你大学生活的一个因素。它是如何塑造你的?
NO.6 芝加哥大学 University of Chicago
芝加哥大学2023-2024Fall附加文书题目已新鲜出炉,与往年不同的是,今年芝大提供了七个Extended Essay而非往年的六选一。
Question 1 (Required)
How does the University of Chicago, as you know it now, satisfy your desire for a particular kind of learning, community, and future? Please address with some specificity your own wishes and how they relate to UChicago.
就你现在所知,芝加哥大学如何满足你对学习氛围、社区和未来的期望?请具体说明你自己的愿望以及它们与芝加哥大学的关系。
问题2:拓展性论文(必填,选择一个)Question 2: Extended Essay (Required; Choose one)
1.Exponents and square roots, pencils and erasers, beta decay and electron capture. Name two things that undo each other and explain why both are necessary.
– Inspired by Emmett Cho, Class of 2027
指数和平方根,铅笔和橡皮,β衰变和电子捕获。说出两件相互undo的事情,并解释为什么它们都是必要的。
——灵感来自2027级Emmett Cho
2.“Where have all the flowers gone?” – Pete Seeger. Pick a question from a song title or lyric and give it your best answer.
– Inspired by Ryan Murphy, AB’21
《Where Have All The Flowers Gone》是皮特·西格演唱的一首歌曲。从歌名或歌词中选择一个问题,然后给出最好的答案。
——灵感来自Ryan Murphy, AB ' 21
3.“Vlog,” “Labradoodle,” and “Fauxmage.” Language is filled with portmanteaus. Create a new portmanteau and explain why those two things are a “patch” (perfect match).
– Inspired by Garrett Chalfin, Class of 2027
" Vlog " "Labradoodle"和" Fauxmage "语言中充满了混合词(由另外两个词的结尾连接而成)。
创造一个新的混合词,并解释为什么这两个词可以完美匹配。
——灵感来自2027级的Garrett Chalfin
4.A jellyfish is not a fish. Cat burglars don’t burgle cats. Rhode Island is not an island. Write an essay about some other misnomer, and either come up with and defend a new name for it or explain why its inaccurate name should be kept.
– Inspired by Sonia Chang, Class of 2025, and Mirabella Blair, Class of 2027
水母不是鱼。飞贼不会偷猫。罗德岛不是一个岛。写一篇关于其他一些用词不当的文章,要么为它想出一个新名字并为之辩护,要么解释为什么应该保留它不准确的名字。
-灵感来自2025级的Sonia Chang和2027级的Mirabella Blair
5.Despite their origins in the Gupta Empire of India or Ancient Egypt, games like chess or bowling remain widely enjoyed today. What modern game do you believe will withstand the test of time, and why?
– Inspired by Adam Heiba, Class of 2027
尽管它们起源于印度笈多帝国或古埃及,但象棋或保龄球等游戏至今仍广受欢迎。
你认为哪款现代游戏能够经受住时间的考验?为什么?
——灵感来自Adam Heiba,2027级
6.There are unwritten rules that everyone follows or has heard at least once in their life. But of course, some rules should be broken or updated. What is an unwritten rule that you wish didn’t exist? (Our custom is to have five new prompts each year, but this year we decided to break with tradition. Enjoy!)
– Inspired by Maryam Abdella, Class of 2026
每个人一生中都遵循或至少听过一次不成文的规则。当然,有些规则应该被打破或更新。
什么是你希望不存在的不成文规则?(我们的习惯是每年有五个新的提示,但今年我们决定打破传统,享受变化吧!)
——灵感来自Maryam Abdella, 2026级
7.And, as always… the classic choose your own adventure option! In the spirit of adventurous inquiry, choose one of our past prompts (or create a question of your own). Be original, creative, thought provoking. Draw on your best qualities as a writer, thinker, visionary, social critic, sage, citizen of the world, or future citizen of the University of Chicago; take a little risk, and have fun!
接下来,是经典的冒险题目。以勇敢探究的精神,从我们过往的题目里选择一个,或者自拟一个题目,要具有原创性和创造力,引人思考。
展现你作为作家,思想家,畅想家,社会评论家,贤哲,世界公民或芝加哥大学未来成员的特质;冒冒险,祝你玩得开心!
NO.7 约翰斯霍普金斯大学 Johns Hopkins University
Tell us about an aspect of your identity (eg. race, gender, sexuality, religion, community, etc…) or a life experience that has shaped you as an individual and how that influenced what you’d like to pursue in college at Hopkins. (This can be a future goal or experience that is either academic, extracurricular or social). 300 word limit (though currently the Common App provides 350 words for students to respond to this prompt).
告诉我们关于你身份的某个方面(例如种族、性别、性取向、宗教、社区等),或者是塑造了你个人的生活经历,以及这些经历如何影响了你在JHU的追求。(这可以是学术、课外或社交方面的未来目标或经历),最多300字(尽管目前Common App为学生提供350字的回复提示)。
NO.7 宾夕法尼亚大学 University of Pennsylvania
宾夕法尼亚大学2023-2024申请附加文书相比去年有所改变,今年不同的学院需要回答不同的附加文书题目。
所有申请者必须回答的题目:
1. Write a short thank-you note to someone you have not yet thanked and would like to acknowledge. (We encourage you to share this note with that person, if possible, and reflect on the experience!) (150-200 words)*
给那些你还没有感谢过但想要感谢的人写一封简短的感谢信。(如果可能的话,我们鼓励你与那个人分享这篇文章,并反思一下你的经历!)(150-200字)*
2. How will you explore community at Penn? Consider how Penn will help shape your perspective, and how your experiences and perspective will help shape Penn. (150-200 words)*
你将如何探索宾大的社区?考虑宾夕法尼亚大学将如何帮助你塑造自己的观点,以及你的经历和观点将如何帮助塑造宾夕法尼亚大学。(150-200字)*
申请文理学院 / 工院 / Wharton / Nursing 需要回答不同的附加题目:
文理学院:
The flexible structure of The College of Arts and Sciences’ curriculum is designed to inspire exploration, foster connections, and help you create a path of study through general education courses and a major. What are you curious about and how would you take advantage of opportunities in the arts and sciences? To help inform your response, applicants are encouraged to learn more about academic offerings within the College of Arts and Sciences at college.upenn.edu/prospective. This information will help you develop a stronger understanding of how the study of the liberal arts aligns with your own goals and aspirations. (150-200 words)
文理学院灵活的课程结构旨在激发探索,促进联系,并帮助您通过通识教育课程和专业创建学习路径。你对什么感到好奇?你会如何利用艺术和科学方面的机会?
为了帮助你更好地回答问题,我们鼓励申请人在college.upenn.edu/prospective上了解更多关于艺术与科学学院的学术课程。这些信息将帮助你对文科的研究如何与你自己的目标和愿望保持一致有更深刻的理解。(150 - 200字)
工程学院:
Penn Engineering prepares its students to become leaders in technology, by combining a strong foundation in the natural sciences and mathematics, exploration in the liberal arts, and depth of study in focused disciplinary majors. Please share how you hope to explore your engineering interests at Penn. To help inform your response, applicants are encouraged to learn more about Penn Engineering and its mission to prepare students for global leadership in technology here. This information will help you develop a stronger understanding of academic pathways within Penn Engineering and how they align with your goals and interests.(150-200 words)
宾夕法尼亚大学工程学院通过将自然科学和数学的坚实基础、文科的探索和重点学科专业的深度学习相结合,为学生成为技术领域的领导者做好准备。请分享你希望如何在宾大探索你的工程兴趣。
为了帮助你更好地回答问题,我们鼓励申请人更多地了解宾夕法尼亚大学工程学院及其使命,即为学生在技术领域的全球领导地位做好准备。这些信息将帮助你更好地理解宾夕法尼亚大学工程学院的学术途径,以及它们如何与你的目标和兴趣保持一致。(150 - 200字)
护理学院
Penn Nursing intends to meet the health needs of society in a global and multicultural world by preparing its students to impact healthcare by advancing science and promoting equity. What do you think this means for the future of nursing, and how do you see yourself contributing to our mission of promoting equity in healthcare? To help inform your response, applicants are encouraged to learn more about Penn Nursing’s mission and how we promote equity in healthcare here. This information will help you develop a stronger understanding of our values and how they align with your own goals and aspirations. (150-200 words)
宾夕法尼亚大学护理学院旨在满足全球和多元文化世界中社会的健康需求,为学生做好准备,通过推进科学和促进公平来影响医疗保健。您认为这对护理的未来意味着什么?您如何看待自己为我们促进医疗公平的使命做出的贡献?
为了帮助你的回答,我们鼓励申请人更多地了解宾夕法尼亚大学护理学院的使命,以及我们如何在这里促进医疗保健的公平性。这些信息将帮助你更好地理解我们的价值观,以及它们如何与你自己的目标和愿望相一致。(150 - 200字)
沃顿商学院
Wharton prepares its students to make an impact by applying business methods and economic theory to real-world problems, including economic, political, and social issues. Please reflect on a current issue of importance to you and share how you hope a Wharton education would help you to explore it. To help inform your response, applicants are encouraged to learn more about the foundations of a Wharton education here. This information will help you better understand what you could learn by studying at Wharton and what you could do afterward. (150-200 words)
沃顿商学院通过将商业方法和经济理论应用于现实世界的问题,包括经济、政治和社会问题,培养学生发挥影响力。请反思一个当前对你来说很重要的问题,并分享你希望沃顿商学院的教育如何帮助你探索这个问题。
为了让你的回答更有说服力,我们鼓励申请人在这里了解更多沃顿教育的基础知识。这些信息将帮助你更好地了解在沃顿学习你能学到什么,以及之后你能做什么。(150 - 200字)
宾夕法尼亚大学还对申请其高度选择性的特殊课程的一年级申请者提出了额外的文书要求,其中包括
DMD:数字媒体设计课程
DMD:数字媒体设计课程
Huntsman:国际研究和商业中的 Huntsman 课程
LSM:罗伊和 Diana Vagelos 生命科学与管理项目
M&T:杰罗姆·费舍尔管理和技术项目
NETS:网络和社会系统工程Rajendra和Neera Singh项目
NHCM:护理和医疗保健管理
七年生物牙科项目
VIPER:Roy
Diana Vagelos 能源研究综合项目。
NO.9 加州理工学院 California Institute of Technology
Required Academic Question
Because of the rigorous courses in the core curriculum, Caltech students don't declare a major until the end of their first year. However, some students arrive knowing which academic fields and areas already most excite them, or which novel fields and areas they most want to explore.
If you had to choose an area of interest or two today, what would you choose? Why did you choose that area of interest? (Max: 200 words)
必答学术问题
由于核心课程的严格要求,加州理工学院的学生在第一学年结束前不会选择专业。然而,有些学生来到这里时,已经知道哪些学术领域让他们最感兴趣,或者哪些新颖的领域是他们最想探索的。
如果你今天必须选择一个或两个感兴趣的领域,你会选择什么?你为什么选择这个感兴趣的领域?(最多200字)
Required Short Answer Questions
1.At Caltech, we investigate some of the most challenging, fundamental problems in science, technology, engineering, and mathematics. Identify and describe two STEM-related experiences from your high school years, either in or out of the classroom, and tell us how and why they activated your curiosity. What about them made you want to learn more and explore further? (Min: 100/Max: 200 words for each experience)
2.The creativity, inventiveness, and innovation of Caltech's students, faculty, and researchers have won Nobel Prizes and put rovers on Mars. But Techers also imagine smaller scale innovations every day, from new ways to design solar cells to how to 3D print dorm decor. How have you been a creator, inventor, or innovator in your own life? (Min: 200 / Max: 250)
3.Caltech's mission – to cultivate learning, discovery, and innovation for the benefit of humanity – relies on its community members embracing fundamental Caltech values:
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- Openness and enthusiasm for having preconceptions challenged
- Respect and appreciation for the idea that, while we are all members of the same community, the opportunities we've had to develop, showcase, and apply our talents have not been equal
- Passion for the ideal that science can and should meaningfully improve the lives of others
Share what one or more of these values evokes for you. (Min: 200 / Max: 400)
必答简答题
1.在加州理工学院,我们研究科学、技术、工程和数学中一些最具挑战性的基本问题。找出并描述你高中时期的两次与STEM相关的经历,无论是在课内还是在课外,并告诉我们它们是如何以及为什么激发了你的好奇心。是什么让你想要学习更多,探索得更远?(每段经历最少100字/最多200字)
2.加州理工学院的学生、教师和研究人员的创造力、发明能力和创新能力获得了诺贝尔奖,并将火星车送上了火星。但老师们每天也在设想更小规模的创新,从设计太阳能电池的新方法到如何3D打印宿舍装饰。在你自己的生活中,你是如何成为一个创造者、发明家或创新者的?(最少100字/最多200字)
3.加州理工学院的使命——培养学习、发现和创新,造福人类——依赖于其社区成员信奉加州理工学院的基本价值观:
对挑战先入之见的开放和热情
尊重和欣赏这样一种理念:虽然我们都是同一个社区的成员,但我们发展、展示和应用自己才能的机会并不平等
对科学能够而且应该有意义地改善他人生活这一理想的热情
分享其中一项或多项价值观对您的启发。(最少100字/最多200字)
Optional Short Answer Questions
We know, we know ... you see optional and start to wonder if we mean it. But in this section, we truly do! See these as completely optional opportunities to show us more of your personality.
Optional. We promise.
1.If there are aspects of your life or social or personal identity that you feel are not captured elsewhere in this application, please tell us about them below. (Max: 150 words)
2.When not surveying the stars, peering through microscopes, or running through marathons of coding, Caltech students pursue an eclectic array of interests that range from speed-cubing to participating in varsity athletics to reading romance novels. What is a favorite interest or hobby, and why does it bring you joy? (Max: 100 words)
3.Did you have a hard time narrowing it down to just one interest or hobby? We understand – Caltech students like to stay busy, too – tell us about another hobby or interest! (Max: 50 words)
可选简答题
1.如果你觉得你的生活或社会或个人身份的某些方面在本申请的其他地方没有被捕捉到,请在告诉我们。(最多150字)
2.加州理工学院的学生除了观察星星、用显微镜观察或者跑马拉松式的编程之外,他们的兴趣爱好五花八门,从速成立方体到参加校队的田径运动,再到阅读浪漫小说。你最喜欢的兴趣或爱好是什么?为什么它能给你带来快乐?(最多100字)
3.你是否很难将它缩小到一个兴趣或爱好?我们理解——加州理工学院的学生也喜欢忙碌——告诉我们你的其他爱好或兴趣吧!(最多50字)
Optional Academic Short Answer Questions
OPTIONAL: Have you had any extenuating circumstances (such as limited course selection or disruptions), that have affected your coursework, but that are not described elsewhere in your application? If so, tell us about them here.
Some Caltech applicants engage in STEM competitions locally, nationally, or internationally (eg., AIME, Science Olympiad, International Science Olympiads). If you have received any STEM honors or awards, list them here (with scores, if applicable).
可选学术简答题
可选:你是否有需要说明的情况(如课程选择有限或中断),影响了你的课程,但没有在你的申请中其他地方描述?如果有,请在这里告诉我们。
一些加州理工学院的申请者参加当地、全国或国际的STEM竞赛。 AIME,科学奥林匹克,国际科学奥林匹克。如果您获得过任何STEM荣誉或奖项,请在此处列出(如果可以,请附上分数)。
NO.10 杜克大学 Duke University
所有2023-24杜克大学申请者都需要回答以下问题:
1. What is your sense of Duke as a university and a community, and why do you consider it a good match for you? If there's something in particular about our offerings that attracts you, feel free to share that as well. (250 word limit)*
作为一所大学和一个社区,你对杜克大学的感觉如何?为什么你认为它很适合你?如果我们有什么特别吸引你的地方,你也可以随意分享。(250字)
以下问题对于所有2023-24年的申请者来说都是可选的。有五个可选问题,最多可以选择两个(每篇250字)。
1.We believe a wide range of personal perspectives, beliefs, and lived experiences are essential to making Duke a vibrant and meaningful living and learning community. Feel free to share with us anything in this context that might help us better understand you and what you might bring to our community.
2.Tell us about an intellectual experience in the past two years that you found absolutely fascinating.
3.We believe there is benefit in sharing and sometimes questioning our beliefs or values; who do you agree with on the big important things, or who do you have your most interesting disagreements with? What are you agreeing or disagreeing about?
4.We recognize that “fitting in” in all the contexts we live in can sometimes be difficult. Duke values all kinds of differences and believes they make our community better. Feel free to tell us any ways in which you’re different, and how that has affected you or what it means to you.
5.Duke’s commitment to inclusion and belonging includes sexual orientation, gender identity, and gender expression. Feel free to share with us more about how your identity in this context has meaning for you as an individual or as a member of a community.
NO.10 西北大学Northwestern University
In the Northwestern Writing Supplement, we ask students to explain why they would like to attend Northwestern. This question is intentionally open-ended. You may choose one or several aspects of Northwestern to focus your writing, though the majority of the essay’s content should relate to your own interests or experiences
在西北大学附加文书中,要求学生解释为什么他们想就读西北大学。这个问题是开放式的。你可以选择西北大学的一个或几个方面来集中你的写作,尽管文书的大部分内容应该与你自己的兴趣或经历相关。
NO.12 达特茅斯学院 Dartmouth College
相比2022-2023的附加文书,今年达特茅斯学院的附加文书题目发生了重大改变:
1、第二道必答题比去年增加了一道题目,今年可以二选一。
2、去年是5道题目自行选择1道回答即可,今年是6道题目任选其一,有3道题目和去年是一样的,其他3道题目是新增的。
1、所有申请人均须撰写,全文不超过100字(必答题)。
Dartmouth celebrates the ways in which its profound sense of place informs its profound sense of purpose. As you seek admission to Dartmouth's Class of 2027, what aspects of the College's academic program, community, or campus environment attract your interest? In short, Why Dartmouth?
申请达特茅斯时,请告诉我们学院的哪些方面的学术项目、社区或校园环境吸引了你?简而言之,为什么是达特茅斯?
2. 所有申请人均须填写。请用200-250字介绍自己(必答题)。
A. There is a Quaker saying: Let your life speak. Describe the environment in which you were raised and the impact it has had on the person you are today.
B. "Be yourself," Oscar Wilde advised. "Everyone else is taken." Introduce yourself.
A.贵格会有一句格言:让你的生活说话。描述您成长的环境以及它如何塑造今天的你。
B.“做你自己,”奥斯卡·王尔德建议道。“因为别人都有人做了。”
3. 所有申请人都需要撰写。请选择以下文书题目之一并用200-250字回答(必答题,6选1)。
A. What excites you?
B. Labor leader and civil rights activist Dolores Huerta recommended a life of purpose. "We must use our lives to make the world a better place to live, not just to acquire things," she said. "That is what we are put on the earth for." In what ways do you hope to make—or are you already making—an impact? Why? How?
C. Dr. Seuss, aka Theodor Geisel of Dartmouth's Class of 1925, wrote, "Think and wonder. Wonder and think." As you wonder and think, what's on your mind?
D. Celebrate your nerdy side.
E. "It's not easy being green…" was the frequent refrain of Kermit the Frog. How has difference been a part of your life, and how have you embraced it as part of your identity and outlook?
F. As noted in the College's mission statement, "Dartmouth educates the most promising students and prepares them for a lifetime of learning and of responsible leadership…" Promise and potential are important aspects of the assessment of any college application, but they can be elusive qualities to capture. Highlight your potential and promise for us; what would you like us to know about you?
A.什么让你兴奋?
B.工党领袖和民权活动家多洛雷斯·韦尔塔(Dolores Huerta)建议过有目标的生活。她说:“我们必须用我们的生命让世界变得更美好,而不仅仅是为了得到,这才是我们来到这个世界上的目的。” 你希望以什么方式产生影响,或者你已经在产生影响?为什么?以及如何产生了影响?
C.苏斯博士,达特茅斯1925届学生西奥多·盖塞尔 (Theodor Geisel),写道:“思考并好奇。好奇且思考。” 你对什么感到好奇和思考?
D.赞美你书呆子的一面。
E. “成为环保人士并不容易……”这是青蛙柯密特(Kermit the Frog)经常重复的一句话。差异是如何成为你生活的一部分的?你是如何把它作为你的身份和观点的一部分来接受的?
F. 正如学院的使命宣言中所指出的,“达特茅斯教育最有前途的学生,让他们为终生学习和负责任的领导能力做好准备……”承诺和潜力是任何大学申请评估的重要方面,但它们可能是难以捉摸的品质。突出您的潜力和对我们的承诺;你想让我们了解你什么?
NO.13 布朗大学Brown University
今年布朗大学给2022-23年的新生一共布置了7道附加文书:
相比去年布朗大学第一年申请的附加文书只要求最多750个字,今年多达1003个字。
1. Brown’s Open Curriculum allows students to explore broadly while also diving deeply into their academic pursuits. Tell us about any academic interests that excite you, and how you might pursue them at Brown. (200-250 words)
2. Students entering Brown often find that making their home on College Hill naturally invites reflection on where they came from. Share how an aspect of your growing up has inspired or challenged you, and what unique contributions this might allow you to make to the Brown community. (200-250 words)
3. Brown students care deeply about their work and the world around them. Students find contentment, satisfaction, and meaning in daily interactions and major discoveries. Whether big or small, mundane or spectacular, tell us about something that brings you joy. (200-250 words)
4. Help us get to know you better by reflecting briefly on each of the questions below. We expect that answers will range from a few words to a few sentences at most. What three words best describe you? (3 words)
5. What is your most meaningful extracurricular commitment, and what would you like us to know about it? (100 words)*
6. If you could teach a class on any one thing, whether academic or otherwise, what would it be? (100 words)*
7. In one sentence, Why Brown? (50 words)*
1. 布朗大学的开放课程允许学生广泛探索,同时深入研究他们的学术追求。告诉我们任何令您兴奋的学术兴趣,以及您如何在布朗大学追求这些兴趣。(200-250字)
2. 进入布朗大学的学生经常发现,在大学山安家自然会让人反思自己的出身。分享你成长过程中的某个方面如何激励或挑战你,以及这可能让你为布朗社区做出什么独特的贡献。(200-250字)
3.布朗大学的学生非常关心他们的工作和周围的世界。学生在日常互动和重大发现中找到满足感、满足感和意义。无论大还是小,平凡还是壮观,请告诉我们一些给您带来快乐的事情。(200-250字)
4. 简要思考以下每个问题,帮助我们更好地了解您。我们期望答案的范围从几个词到最多几句话。哪三个词最能描述您?(3个字)
5. 您最有意义的课外活动是什么?您希望我们了解哪些内容?(100字)*
6. 如果你可以教授一门课程,无论是学术上的还是其他方面的,你会教什么?(100字)*
7.一句话,为什么选择布朗?(50字) *
NO.17 康奈尔大学Cornell University
康奈尔大学附加文书因学院而异:
布鲁克斯公共政策学院
Why are you drawn to studying public policy? Drawing on your experiences, tell us about why you are interested in your chosen major and how attending the Brooks School will help you achieve your life goals.
你为什么喜欢研究公共政策?告诉我们你为什么对所选专业感兴趣,以及就读该学院会如何帮助你实现人生目标。
农业和生命科学学院
必选题目
Why are you drawn to studying the major you have selected? Please discuss how your interests and related experiences have influenced your choice. How will an education from the College of Agriculture and Life Sciences (CALS) at Cornell University specifically serve to support your learning, growth, and the pursuit of your goals? (650-word limit)
你为什么会被你选择的专业所吸引?请讨论你的兴趣和相关经历是如何影响你的选择的。康奈尔大学农业与生命科学学院(CALS)的教育将如何帮助你学习、成长和追求你的目标?(650字)
Essay Option 1
At Cornell CALS, we aim to leave the world better than we found it, so we seek out those who are not simply driven to master their discipline, but who are also passionate about doing so to serve the public good. Please elaborate on an experience where you had a meaningful impact on people, a community, and/or an environment of importance to you. (200-word limit)
在CALS,我们的目标是让世界变得比我们发现的更美好,所以我们寻找那些不仅被驱使去掌握自己学科的人,而且还热衷于为公众利益服务的人。请详细说明你对人、社区和/或对你重要的环境产生有意义影响的经历。(200字的限制)
Essay Option 2
Cornell CALS is dedicated to purpose-driven study of the agricultural, life, environmental, and social sciences and welcomes students with interests that span a wide variety of disciplines. Given our agricultural history and commitment to educating the next generation of agriculturalists, please share if you have a background or interest in agriculture, regardless of your intended major. An "agricultural entity" for the purpose of this question is defined as cultivating soil, growing crops, and raising livestock (e.g., farm, ranch, greenhouse, vineyard, etc.).
Select all that apply:
Please feel free to share additional details (optional). (100-word limit)
- A primary source of income for my parent/guardian(s) comes from ownership of or employment by an agricultural entity.
- My extended family owns or operates an agricultural entity.
- I have experience working in an agricultural entity.
- I have interest in pursuing a career in an agricultural entity.
分享你是否有农业背景或有兴趣从事农业事业。选择所有符合条件的话题来分享:我的家人拥有或经营一个农场、我有从事农业工作的经验、我有兴趣从事农业事业。
建筑、艺术与规划学院
How do your interests directly connect with your intended major at the College of Architecture, Art, and Planning (AAP)? Why architecture (B.Arch), art (BFA), or urban and regional studies (URS)? B. Arch applicants, please provide an example of how a creative project or passion sparks your motivation to pursue a 5-year professional degree program. BFA applicants may want to to consider how they could integrate a range of interests and available resources at Cornell into a coherent art practice. URS students may want to emphasize their enthusiasm and depth of interest in the study of urban and regional issues.
你的兴趣与你在建筑艺术与规划学院(AAP)的专业有何直接联系?为什么选择建筑学(b.a ch)、艺术(BFA)或城市与区域研究(URS)?B.高级申请者,请举例说明一个创意项目或激情如何激发你攻读5年专业学位课程的动力。BFA申请者可能想要考虑如何将康奈尔大学的兴趣和可用资源整合到一个连贯的艺术实践中。URS的学生可能希望强调他们对城市和区域问题研究的热情和兴趣深度。
文理学院
At the College of Arts and Sciences, curiosity will be your guide. Discuss how your passion for learning is shaping your academic journey, and what areas of study or majors excite you and why. Your response should convey how your interests align with the College, and how you would take advantage of the opportunities and curriculum in Arts and Sciences.
在文理学院,好奇心将成为你的向导。讨论一下你对学习的热情是如何塑造你的学术旅程的,哪些学习领域或专业让你兴奋,为什么?你的回答应该传达出你的兴趣是如何与学院一致的,以及你将如何利用文理方面的机会和课程。
布鲁克斯公共政策学院
Why are you drawn to studying public policy? Drawing on your experiences, tell us about why you are interested in your chosen major and how attending the Brooks School will help you achieve your life goals.
你为什么喜欢学习公共政策?根据你的经历,告诉我们你为什么对你选择的专业感兴趣,以及参加布鲁克斯学校将如何帮助你实现你的人生目标。
商学院
What kind of a business student are you? Using your personal, academic, or volunteer/work experiences, describe the topics or issues that you care about and why they are important to you. Your response should convey how your interests align with the school to which you are applying within the Cornell SC Johnson College of Business (Charles H. Dyson School of Applied Economics and Management or the Peter and Stephanie Nolan School of Hotel Administration).
你是什么样的商科学生?用你的个人、学术或志愿者/工作经历,描述你关心的话题或问题,以及为什么它们对你很重要。你的回答应该表明你的兴趣与你申请的康奈尔大学庄森商学院(查尔斯·戴森应用经济与管理学院或彼得和斯蒂芬妮·诺兰酒店管理学院)是如何一致的。
工程学院
所有申请人都需要写两篇附加文书。每篇文书的字数限制为 250个字。所有申请人都需要撰写文书1。对于文书2,您必须在问题A和问题B之间进行选择。
文书1How do your interests directly connect with Cornell Engineering? If you have an intended major, what draws you to that department at Cornell Engineering? If you are unsure what specific engineering field you would like to study, describe how your general interest in engineering most directly connects with Cornell Engineering. It may be helpful to concentrate on one or two things that you are most excited about.
你的兴趣与康奈尔工程学院有何直接联系?如果你想选专业,是什么吸引你来康奈尔大学工程学院?如果你不确定你想学习的具体工程领域,描述你对工程的一般兴趣如何与康奈尔大学工程学院最直接的联系。把注意力集中在一两件你最感兴趣的事情上可能会有所帮助。
文书2
Question A:Describe an engineering problem that impacts your local community. This could be your school, neighborhood, town, region, or a group you identify with. Describe one to three things you might do as an engineer to solve the problem.
问题 A:描述一个影响当地社区的工程问题。可以是你学校、社区、城镇、地区或其他你认同的团体。描述作为工程师解决问题可能会做的一到三件事。
Question B: Diversity in all forms is intrinsic to excellence in engineering. Engineering the best solutions to complex problems is often achieved by drawing from the diverse ingenuity of people from different backgrounds, lived experiences, and identities. How do you see yourself contributing to the diversity and/or the inclusion of the Cornell Engineering community? What is the unique voice you would bring to the Cornell Engineering community?
问题 B:你如何看待自己为康奈尔工程社区的多样性、包容性做出贡献?你会给康奈尔工程社区带来什么独特的声音?
人类生态学院
How have your related experiences influenced your decision to apply to the College of Human Ecology (CHE)? How will your choice of major impact your goals and plans for the future? Your response should show us that your interests and aspirations align with CHE and your choice of major.
你的相关经历是如何影响你决定申请人类生态学院的?你的专业选择将如何影响你未来的目标和计划?你的回答应该向我们表明你的兴趣和愿望与CHE和你选择的专业是一致的。
劳资关系学院
Using your personal, academic, or volunteer/work experiences, describe the topics or issues that you care about and why they are important to you. Your response should show us that your interests align with the ILR School.
用你个人的、学术的或志愿者/工作经验,描述你关心的问题以及它们为何对很重要。
NO.18 哥伦比亚大学Columbia University
今年哥伦比亚大学的附加文书是旧文书题目、改写文书题目和新文书题目的有趣组合,并调整了字数限制。
哥大的附加文书题目分为列举问题(List questions)和简答题(Short answer questions)两部分。
对于List questions,最多100字,回答此问题时,请参考以下指南:
1.要求申请者使用逗号或分号列举每个单独的回答
2.这些项目不必编号或按任何特定顺序。
3.书籍或其他出版物的标题不需要斜体或下划线
4.不需要作者姓名、字幕或解释性备注。
简答题Short answer questions,150字以内
1.List a selection of texts, resources and outlets that have contributed to your intellectual development outside of academic courses, including but not limited to books, journals, websites, podcasts, essays, plays, presentations, videos, museums and other content that you enjoy. (100 words or fewer)
2.A hallmark of the Columbia experience is being able to learn and thrive in an equitable and inclusive community with a wide range of perspectives. Tell us about an aspect of your own perspective, viewpoint or lived experience that is important to you, and describe how it has shaped the way you would learn from and contribute to Columbia’s diverse and collaborative community. (150 words or fewer)
3.In college/university, students are often challenged in ways that they could not predict or anticipate. It is important to us, therefore, to understand an applicant’s ability to navigate through adversity. Please describe a barrier or obstacle you have faced and discuss the personal qualities, skills or insights you have developed as a result. (150 words or fewer)
4.Why are you interested in attending Columbia University? We encourage you to consider the aspect(s) that you find unique and compelling about Columbia. (150 words or fewer)
5.What attracts you to your preferred areas of study at Columbia College or Columbia Engineering? (150 words or fewer)
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