雅思大作文7分范文及解析：老师和父母谁更重要

双边类大作文，教育类话题

Some people believe that teachers play a more important role in the intellectual development and the social contact of children while some others believe that the parents are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

题目来源：2008年9月6日大陆雅思大作文

1、题目大意

一些人认为教师在孩子的智力发展和社会交往中发挥着更重要的作用，而另一些人则认为父母更重要。讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。

2、思路解析

这是一道双边类大作文，聊的是父母和老师对孩子的重要性。双边类大作文，需要对每个观点分别表达同意或反对，最终的结论就是我的立场，可以是中立（双方都同意或都反对），也可以是单边支持某一方立场。审题是需要注意两点，一是题目限定了讨论范围，即“ intellectual development and the social contact of children”，因此重要性的讨论需要围绕这两点展开。二是题目中包含了老师和家长的比较关系。下面月半鸭和大家一起来看下具体观点。

首先来看老师更重要的观点，有两方面。

一是老师往往比家长更专业。教师通常接受了长时间的教育和培训，掌握了教育心理学、教育方法和技巧等相关知识。这使他们能够有效地传授知识，以及针对学生的不同需要提供正确的帮助。

二是学校给孩子提供了更加真实及多元化的社会环境，老师能在其中进行引导，帮助孩子学会如何与同龄人建立友谊、相互尊重以及解决冲突或进行合作。同时孩子在接受各科目老师教学的过程中，能促进全面的智力和审题发展。

三是老师相比家长在更加中立客观。由于没有血缘关系，老师更可能在评估和反馈学生的行为和能力时保持中立和客观。这有助于孩子获得更为公正的评价，从而更好地认识自己。

其次来看家长更重要的原因，同样有三方面。

一是家长相较于老师会对孩子有持续的影响。家长从孩子出生的那一刻开始就对其产生影响，并持续整个成长过程中，而老师可能只在孩子生命中出现一段时间。

二是孩子往往会模仿家长的行为和态度。家庭是孩子最初学习价值观、信仰和文化传统的地方。因此，家长的榜样作用至关重要。一个诚实、善良和有责任感的家长往往会培养出同样的孩子。

三是家长比老师及其他人更了解自己的孩子。他们知道孩子的兴趣、恐惧和需求，因此能够为孩子提供最有针对性的支持和指导。

3、提纲

4、高分范文示例

The conventional wisdom holds that teachers are the primary agents of children's education, responsible for fostering their intellectual and social growth. However, I maintain that parents bear the primary responsibility for their children's education.

While some argue that teachers are the principal purveyors of knowledge, providing structured curricula for the transmission of subject-specific expertise, intellectual development encompasses much more than academic knowledge. Gardner's theory of multiple intelligences highlights the importance of musical, naturalistic, and intrapersonal intelligences, which are challenging to teach in a classroom environment. Educating children in these domains requires tailored teaching approaches that cater to their individual needs, something that parents are better placed to provide, given their superior knowledge of their children and greater availability. Furthermore, research indicates that young children tend to emulate their caretakers' thought patterns, rather than those of their educators.

From a social perspective, parents enjoy a closer connection with their children than teachers do. Having been present since their children's birth, parents have ample opportunities to interact with their offspring on a one-to-one basis, a luxury that teachers may not have. As such, parents' influence on their children's social development is likely more significant. While some argue that children's interactions with teachers help develop their social skills, the truth is that children learn best through observation and imitation, where parents' social skills and behaviors have a profound impact on their children's development.

In conclusion, while both teachers and parents play important roles in shaping children's development, the primary responsibility for their children's education falls squarely on parents.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

be largely responsible for   … 为…负主要责任

childhood education   儿童教育

cognitive development   认知能力发展

multiple intelligence(s)   多元智能

tailor   量身定制

intimate   亲密的

it could be inferred that   … 可以推断…

exaggerate   夸大

teacher-student interaction   师生交流

neglect   忽视