剑9写作7分范文及解析：Test4 语言消失不重要

观点类大作文，文化类话题

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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1、题目大意

每年都有一些语言消失，有人认为这不重要，因为世界上语言变少会使得生活会更加便利，你是否同意？

2、思路解析

这是一道观点类大作文，聊的是语言消失的问题。审题时需要注意观点中的因果关系，即“因为更少的语言能让生活更简单”，所以“语言消失不重要”，我们可以分析“因”、“果”本身否有问题以及因果逻辑是否有漏洞来进行反驳，下面，月半鸭和大家一起来看下具体观点。

首先，来看这个观点的合理性。

语言更少确实可能增加生活便利性，比如沟通会变得更加容易。原本不同地区的人为了沟通需要特地去学习一门对方的语言，这个过程本身有难度，并且由于语言不同，在交流过程中还会因为翻译或理解不到位等原因导致双方产生误解。而在同一种语言体系下，这种误会也会进一步减少，双方也更容易理解对方所想表达的内容。

然后，来看这个观点不合理之处。是否重要不应该只考虑生活便利。

一是语言记录了一个民族或国家的历史。这个民族如何诞生、发展并延续至今，以及在历史上发生过哪些重要事情，先祖有哪些重要的举措或成就等等，都是通过独有的语言文字记录下来，并被后人所知晓和借鉴。一旦对应的语言消失，后人可能难以理解甚至知晓这些历史，这对于历史研究来说是巨大的损失。

二是语言本身是文化体系的重要组成部分，是文化传承、发展、繁荣的重要载体。从个人角度来说，语言能够让人产生归属感和自我身份的认同感。从学术研究角度来说，语言存在本身蕴藏了一个民族独有的生活方式和思维模式，通过对不同语言的研究，能够更清楚地了解不同文化。因此，语言的消失对于世界文化多样性来说，是一种损失。

3、提纲

4、高分范文示例

While a pearl of common wisdom has it that fewer languages existing for communication would bring about the convenience in our daily life, I would argue that the disappearance of those linguistic data is not of insignificance.

One of the reasons why those languages should not be dismissed may lie to the fact that some of the minor-speaking languages have recorded the things happened in the past for a particular ethnic group. Those histories and stories vividly have reflected how our ancestors had struggled with their life against all the hardships and fierce surroundings, and how they sincerely adhered to the final humanities via some of the aforementioned languages. Without the ability of interpreting this linguistic data, we may lose forever the experience and guidelines that could be injected from the former generations, therefore making the same mistakes that occurred once in the historical time when exploring a particular geographic place.

Another source of why those languages ought not to vanish may be due to the cultural identity, or should I say the thought diversity, lying behind which people insist on in some specific ethnic groups. Those thoughts, recorded mostly by those minority languages, though weakened gradually result of the invasion of the stronger civilizations, indeed are the perfect reference in which the whole society can strengthen its improvement by fixing the flaws in the meantime. The loss of words of some particular communities would somewhat discourage the possibilities of the further steps of the society itself.

Notwithstanding the huge convenience brought about when the “babel” time could re-emerge via letting down the barrier of misunderstandings derived from the various languages, this action also gestates more calamities than contributions. Livings in the social communities granted involve the pursuit of efficiency and convenience, but other elements and identities —diversity of lives among cultural groups, customs and traditions established in a particular geographic location that are with human wisdom and sophistication, civilizations fostered by people from harnessing the natural surroundings to fit with their lives, etc.—are also valued seriously, or even more seriously than just having a global and highly efficient living mode. Most of those components and characteristics are conveyed by multiple languages, some of which are just the ones talked about in this article, facing the destiny of being extinct alongside the ignorance of the public. A state of mind must be made that simpler and easier livings are based on the foundation of complexity and on eliminating the immaterial subtleties, but not, adversely, on extinguishing the lights that have been and still are guiding us to the final intelligence.

In conclusion, the loss of the linguistic data has its essence to be concerned about severely, and the convenience, though witnessed alongside the process, should not be the reason we abandon those minority languages.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

Ethic group  民族

Ancestor  祖先；先辈

Vividly  淋漓尽致；生动地

Struggle with  与…斗争

Hardships and fierce surroundings  艰难险阻

Adhere to  坚持

Aforementioned  如上所述；之前提到的

Interpret  解释 ; 诠释

Vanish  消失 ; 消亡

Culture identity  文化身份

Invasion  武装入侵 ; 侵略

Flaw  缺陷；缺点

Discourage  阻拦 ; 阻止；使灰心

Notwithstanding  尽管如此；虽然

Babel  巴别塔

Gestate  怀孕 ; 妊娠

Calamity  灾难；灾祸

Sophistication  复杂度；教养

Immaterial  非物质的

Subtlety  微妙；精妙

Extinguish  消灭；熄灭

Minority language  少数民族语言